Chapter 5, Page 3

May 14, 2007

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Reply Mr. Neil, May 06, 2007

I don't normally break a sentence between two pages. It doesn't really work for webcomics, but I figured I could get away with it one time.

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Reply KrazyKat, May 14, 2007

I think it works just fine. Kinda like how TV shows often end with a cliffhanger. THEN you have to wait a whole week!

I also like how there seems to be a little tension in the team. Maybe Dasien can exploit that tension...

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