Chapter 1, Page 6

Jan 10, 2006

Average Rating: 4.00
Author's Comments:

Reply Mr. Neil, Jan 10, 2006

The first twenty pages are kind of slow. The action begins shorter afterward. Right now, just enjoy the cool clouds and rock formations I colored in pages like these.

I'm really proud of those clouds. I haven't really done clouds like that in a while.

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User's Comments:

Reply Jydra, Jan 11, 2006

Yah the clouds look real good!

I also like the perspective you put on him.

Reply veloce08, Jan 14, 2006

I understand you probably have a lot to fit on the page, but in my opinion, the text is too small and it makes it a pain in the ass to read. 4'd for great art.

-veloce

Reply Mr. Neil, Jan 16, 2006

eah, I remember this being a problem back when I first posted this page. You'll notice that on the very next page, the text gets a little bigger and more readable.

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